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"Broken Roller Coaster" by ~MCRcrazedfan31:iconMCRcrazedfan31:



It's like a roller coaster,
but only headed down.
Once you step on,
it's hard to get off.

It brings no excitement,
just despair and regret.
It's a monster with one cause,
to destroy your life.

It knows when you're at your weakest,
like a dog that can smell fear.
Attacking without notice,
it strives to do its worst.

You're its victim,
pleading for someone's help.
And yet, it shows no mercy,
like a tornado in a storm.

It's a murderer,
with its hands crushing your life.
Your a helpless, wounded animal,
growing weaker every day.

Once it finds you,
it'll do its best to make sure you're gone.
Your sorrow is its prey,
feeding it and making it stronger.

Some people are lucky to get off,
others have no choice.
But with support from a hero,
anyone can make it through.

If your lucky to get off,
life still won't be normal.
Scars will remain unhealed,
some mental, others physical.

But these scars give you strength,
to carry on and not be afraid to keep on living.
©2007-2009 ~MCRcrazedfan31
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Author's Comments

Okay this is a poem i had to write for school. It's about depression and shows others and my struggles. Hope you guys........uhm.................like it?

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:iconpatient-13:
its a good poem! i like it! :clap:
very...imaginistic..
(is there such a word?):rofl:

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Straight jacket and guitar.
:iconmcrcrazedfan31:
thankies!:glomp:

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"To many doses and I'm starting to get and attraction..." -Avenged Sevenfold "Bat Country"
:iconjacobyxshaddix:
i like......damn how do you get peoms on here cause i type them on microsoft word so yeah

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I Tell Them, 'If You Really Want To Do It. Do It.' If You Really Want To Do Something, You Can.
:iconmcrcrazedfan31:
thankies!

i think you add the file it's on............but if that don't work you jus type it under "add text" when you submit it (thats what i do)

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"To many doses and I'm starting to get and attraction..." -Avenged Sevenfold "Bat Country"
:iconjacobyxshaddix:
okay i'll try in a sec

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I Tell Them, 'If You Really Want To Do It. Do It.' If You Really Want To Do Something, You Can.
:iconpatient-13:
you're welcome! :hug:

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Straight jacket and guitar.
:iconkawaii-shikyo:
aw..i really liek this une ;o

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Be yourself, don't take anyone's shit, and never let them take you alive..

Spider Spider on teh wall, Aint joo got no sense at all? Cant cha see the walls been plastered, Now your stuck you silly bastard...XD

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:iconmcrcrazedfan31:
thankies:hug:

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"To many doses and I'm starting to get and attraction..." -Avenged Sevenfold "Bat Country"
:iconcascadafan:
I liked it too.

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